In Russia we
have a saying, “The greeting you receive depends on your clothes, the farewell
you get depends on your intellect.” Although the main point is that your
intellect is more important than your looks, I think another point lurks deeper.
First and surface impressions are often inaccurate, as it takes time and effort
to really fathom another person; this is the idea presented here.
Psychological research
and experiments don by Princeton psychologists Janine Willis and Alexander
Todorov showed that people form a first impression by looking at a stranger’s
face in a tenth of a second. This means that in the time it takes us to blink,
our brain manages to interpret the face in front of us and come to a conclusion
that stays engraved in our mind. Poker face or not, we judge, conclude and act accordingly.
Does this prove to be a human super power and lift us up or, on the contrary,
the human downfall that drives us over the edge? Whatever you might have been told,
a person’s outward appearance is where we get our first, fleeting, but lasting
impression. In Crime and Punishment the
build, face, clothes and the way characters carry themselves are described in
vivid detail. This helps us, as readers, almost visualize a persona we have
never seen. Fyodor Dostoevsky uses the outfits, jewelry and hairstyles of his
characters to make readers subconsciously form assumptions and conclusions
before we actually “meet” the character. He then, as the book progresses,
either proves us and your conculsions wrong or right. On the part of Dostoevsky,
it is a demonstration of the menace that lies within quick and shallow judgment.
The dangers of
hasty judgment in Crime and Punishment
are exposed using two polar-opposite characters, Luzhin and Sonya. First off,
Luzhin. Respectable, educated and creditable, although somewhat cocky, that is
how we see him in the letter Raskolnikov receives from his mother. He is
presented pretty much in the same light, when we get to meet him “face to face”
in Raskolnikov’s apartment. However, as the story line progresses and
circumstances change, his true colors seep out. When we finally see Luzhin for
who he is, without all the adornment and garnish that disguised him originally,
then we have the right to form and express an opinion concerning him and in
turn expect it to hold up under examination. Some would say, “Over the course
of the novel Luzhin becomes despicable”. Consider this. He does not become despicable when we realize he is so, but he has been
despicable all this time. We were just a bit enchanted or deceived by our first
impression of Luzhin.
On the other
side of the spectrum we have Sonya. She is living contradiction of Saadi’s
words, “Whatever makes an impression on the heart seems lovely in the eye”. Our
first encounter with her happens even before we meet her, in the tavern, when
Marmeladov describes her to Raskolnikov. She is portrayed by him (in his
drunken monologue) as “unfortunate”, a victim of “ill-meaning persons”, and the
savior of her family. But we cannot easily take his word on the matter. We have
to see her for ourselves, give her a once-over to from our opinion of the girl.
When we do meet her “face to face” she is obscene and “adorned in street
fashion with a clearly and shamefully explicit purpose” (page 183). The “thin,
pale, and frightened little face, mouth open and eyes fixed in terror” (page
183) raises a wave of compassion in us, although this in no way excuses her
suggestive appearance. As time goes by, we get our second and third “face to
face” encounters with Sonya. During yet another encounter she reads the story
of Lazarus to Raskolnikov, and we see an unexpected and unconventional hallo
form over her head. Although she is the same person she was before, we finally get
to see the real Sonya. We no longer have to go on her looks alone, but get to
see her heart and the love that inhabits it. As a result, our opinion on
Sonya’s total disgrace and corruption, which formed solely on looks, is
transformed and refined. It becomes more accurate, for it is now based not on
her shell alone, but on the pearl that lies within.
In conclusion, perhaps
you have heard, “Dress to impress”, “You never get a second chance to make a
first impression”, or even “The first impression is the truth, and all that
follows is merely the excuse of memory”. However, relying on first impressions
and sticking to them no matter what, is like judging a book by its cover alone
and then never giving it a second glance, thought, or chance to change your
life.
Dear Masha,
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed with your essay! It is very convincing and very truthful. I love the way you have so much diction! My favorite words would have to be: lurks, fathom, fleeting, menace, and obscene. These words pull me into the story and consume my emotions. I also really liked it when you said poker face. You wisely used this so that your essay would attract another kind or reader. Your argument likewise was strong and truthful! You have convinced at least one reader, me, and I’m guessing many more in the future!
Masha, thank you for such a thoughtful essay. It made me to look back at myself and realize how I've been so judgmental with people. It is absolutely true that people tend to come up with a concluded opinion or an impression about a person within a second. But I did not know that it would be that fast- in a tenth of a second? that's crazy! Anyways, I really liked your logical and step-by-step explanation in your writing. Though I've read the book, I think those who did not get to read Crime and Punishment can easily get a firm idea of those two contrasting characters after reading your essay. For me, your two concluding sentences in both paragraphs really caught my attention- "We were just a bit enchanted or deceived by our first impression of Luzhin."; "It becomes more accurate, for it is now based not on her shell alone, but on the pearl that lies within." The word choice "deceived" automatically gives the reader this sense of craftiness and evilness, leading him to think that something had been wrong with his judgment with Luzhin. The word choice "pearl" automatically creates this picture of a dirty clam shell but inside, a beautiful glowing pearl. Masha, I think you are very talented at conveying a hard concept into a much simpler yet clear idea. Thank you for saying things that need to be said.
ReplyDeleteBravo! This writing is nicely composed and I am quite fond of the topic you have chosen. Beginning with a Russian saying really ties the writing together and i thought it was a wise choice! The words you have chosen to express your ideas quite accurately do their job, simultaneously drawing the composer of the writing itself. I can hear your tone clearly, which sounds intellectual. It creates a pleasant atmosphere for the reader, which I think is very important. I enjoyed the hints of different perspectives like references to psychological research, the Russian saying and Crime and Punishment, they, too, tied the writing together in a way that presented you as a successful author.
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with angiedarko, "Beginning with a Russian saying really ties the writing together..." Let me begin by complimenting you also on the authority with which you write. This is a topic of timeless importance, and you approach it with clarity and originality. The most powerful part for me was the last sentence when you say, "chance to change your life." When we judge people superficially, we miss out on the opportunity to grow, and learn! This is something I am convicted of all the time-- I think it really applies to high-schoolers, and our insecurities.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you wrote this, and I enjoyed reading it!
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Wow, good job on your essay! I enjoyed reading it, a lot! First of all I want to say that I was really impressed that you chose to talk about, I would say, "Russian culture". I like how you started your essay with a quote saying how people think about others when they meet each other. The examples, and the experiments that you talked about are great, and I think that's a good way of proving your topic. I also noticed that you used a lot of examples from Crime&Punishment which is a great idea! Awesome! Your word choice is great, you used a lot of strong good words. You explained everything well and proved your point. Again, good job on writing this essay:)
ReplyDeleteWow, this is an absolutely fantastic essay. It was written superbly and it just flowed perfectly. You had me captured in your writing; I was not bored for a single second. I absolutely love your opening quote; it stirred immediate interest and curiosity. Your examples were spot on and clearly supported you statement. Your examples from Crime&Punishment have gotten me excited to read the book in the future and I look forward to seeing how your statement plays out in it. Your overall structure was amazing. It made me want to keep reading the next sentence and then the next and the next and so on. You are an amazing writer, Masha. Keep up the amazing work!
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